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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

I love and admire the way you can simply write without the fully formed idea and just conjure up such breathtaking imagery and mystery in a single scene, Nathan.

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

This is great, Nathan. It very much reminded me, in its style of writing and storytelling of The Gunslinger by Stephen King which has the opening line “The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed”

Your opening line “The carriage moved under a searing sun and its wheels broke across ground blackened from the long blister of days” is just as enticing and intriguing to make me want to keep reading more of this story

Brilliantly done 👍🏼

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