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Ann Collins's avatar

I'm reading this delicious morsel with a thunderstorm raging outside...perfect.

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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

Damn, Nathan. This is so beautiful and evocative. I'm left with a bit of a bitter taste in my mouth about Mara. An experiment that, if intentional, was perfectly successful and perhaps necessary for what's to come (I hope much more, as I've been enjoying this so much). The descriptive passage about the green bank's lamp on the desk is so masterfully written and enriched by little details like "my fingers toying with the little switch that dangled from the green shade," that I've gone back and re-read it several times. Also, I love how you start off that paragraph with "The day before I found her dead," which provokes a sudden change of perspective on the story. Another great episode!

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