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Jim Cummings's avatar

This has become a movie in my mind, Nathan. I don't know any better way to put it. Absolutely fabulous in every way.

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Lor's avatar

Nathan I just love these lines~

“….her voice carrying the edge of a dream.”

“…her eyes would be open, to follow me around the room like a portrait on a wall…”

“A gust of wind fled through the street, dust eddies whipped up in its wake. The cool of the air teased me, teased me like it always had…”

Sometimes there are no defining words. It is more than that . They move me.

“…she could Feel closer to the earth knowing that air had chosen to find its way into the house.”

Now this means something. I’m waiting patiently to find out. I can’t help thinking, many a good mystery, starts and ends in the bathroom.

Please, “dart around“ .

I promise to keep pace.

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