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Sharron Bassano's avatar

"...In the space of several days I had elicited laughter and an apology. And, I had licked her finger. I allowed a smile at my small achievements..." Poor guy. I love this small victory.

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Kimberly Warner's avatar

So much to love in this chapter. But I’m entirely hooked by something “trapped between worlds.” Your imagination is layered, mythic, and warm Nathan. And I also smile every time I read the narrator’s comments as he/you decipher Renn’s journals and delight in your discoveries.

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