I particularly liked the use of the slash as a device to unexpectedly switch perspective. Very nice. (Does referencing that piece of punctuation constitute a spoiler? Sorry. But then why are you reading the comments before finishing the tale? Silly you.)
Also, “The links jangle the happy tune of purpose” is my favourite phrase amongst many; the idea that this sadistic metal so loves its grim job is particularly pleasing.
Great atmosphere to this story.
I particularly liked the use of the slash as a device to unexpectedly switch perspective. Very nice. (Does referencing that piece of punctuation constitute a spoiler? Sorry. But then why are you reading the comments before finishing the tale? Silly you.)
Also, “The links jangle the happy tune of purpose” is my favourite phrase amongst many; the idea that this sadistic metal so loves its grim job is particularly pleasing.
Exactly, if someone reads down here, it is at their own peril!
(Not that many have read this, so thank you, silent editor...)