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Kimberly Warner's avatar

Wow. Just wow. Reading this, I am lulled into the most welcomed escape, drawn into the “life force beneath the streets,” lingering in its abandonment of time, tangling with the symbiotic bouquets, tumbling into the botanist’s eminence. Your superb, delicious, yawning sentences that mirror the narrator’s inner experience.

“she was spiritual, emitting something that invited you, stilled you, made you want to sit and find acceptance in the mere act of sitting alone, and more often than not I would be content to do just that.”

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Ann Collins's avatar

Nathan, your writing has a lushness that’s creating a place that’s both precise and dreamlike, in just a few sentences. Delightful and immersive! Maybe this is what happens when a scientist picks up a pen and explores magical realism?

My favorite bits:

. . .a subconscious sensation of being drawn or pulled, like an ocean tugged at by a distant moon.

. . .flowers I had simply never seen before, having shapes and hues that spoke of connections natural and symbiotic and not the pretentious pairings of a florist.

. . . in my head, her voice there and present and as if she was whispering straight into my ears.

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