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Apr 5Liked by Nathan Slake

Omg! I can’t tell you how thrilled I am to have Ren and Brae back in my consciousness! And I’m glad you didn’t link back to the old one, I often get flustered when there are too many places calling my attention at once. Within is sane. Now, are you for real about this journal NOT a fiction? I own the Codex Seraphinianus btw. Never thought I’d meet another. ☺️

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Ahh, it's like meeting an old friend again. Now, don't you dare lose it again! Looking forward to what lies ahead.

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This is my intro to Brae and Renn. And I am here for it!!

Also, I totally get finding “lost” stuff in places people might laugh to hear about. I think sometimes those things have simply gone on journey, and returned when they were ready. 😅

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Apr 4Liked by Nathan Slake

Oh, they are back! Loved reading Brae and Renn again. But hadn’t she disappeared last time we read?

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They’re back! Them and the very tricky narrator. 😉 metafiction to the max.

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Gahhh! Now I’m hooked on another of your brilliant serialised fictions… this is so not good Nathan, you are halting my flow ! But already I can’t wait for the next chapter… I’m not going back though despite not knowing the story, although I do hope you’ll add some of the sketches!

Do you have a copy of Codex Seraphinianus… please say yes so I can be green with envy! I have always dreamed of owning this book, the price though!

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Apr 5Liked by Nathan Slake

Very mysterious... I like starting fresh though. It was too much homework to go back and find all the old stuff so I just jumped right in, but other entries I've read were pretty nice. I look forward to seeing where they fit in eventually.

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Phew. I am relieved you were able to find the pages. (Behind the toilet?!) How glad I am to read their journey continuing, so beautifully, lyrically translated by you again!

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I’m so glad to see this installment! And not the first time she’s seen them? That line, where placed gave me goosebumps…

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Wow...I nearly fell for the journal, but remembered previous instances and was a tad cautious!

So many phrases and sentences that I love, trying to pin down a favourite takes me to this:

"It burned bright in the sky, a corona of cool blue cloaking a heart as fierce as ember. It was beautiful. Then it winked out, leaving us motionless, the night sky re-emerging in dim jealousy."

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Apr 7Liked by Nathan Slake

Oh, I didn’t realise quite how much I had missed Renn and his bumbling ways until he retuned! What a treat it was to read. Your descriptions are so rich, “The light struck the myriad branches lining the path, casting each leaf and twig into darting shadow-shapes” - I so love the images that get planted in my mind through this novel. Long live your creative wave.

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Apr 6Liked by Nathan Slake

This is delicious, Nathan - as you know, I'm a big fan of found texts ;) This must undoubtedly go back to the "Red Book of Westmarch" which as a child I was convinced was real. Hooray for the return of Brae and Renn!

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I’m so happy to see the return of our old friends and I’m glad you chose to start with the first chapter. It’s such a conventional idea I know!

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Apr 6Liked by Nathan Slake

What planet are we on, and in what universe is the month/date/year format?

“What significance had that meteorite brought?”

“It is a decision I have forever had to live with.”

A brand new story for me.

Sitting on my coach, hot chocolate in hand, I’m ready and waiting for answers…

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So lesson learned; never ever, ever, tidy up the house again with anything unfinished visiting....

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Brilliant, once again. I can’t wait for this series to return!

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