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Ben Wakeman's avatar

I know I commented that I was going to save this for later, but I couldn’t. This is perhaps the most poetic resignation in the history of resignations! The world you create is so fantastical it would be impossible to believe without your vivid prose that brings it to life.

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Kimberly Warner's avatar

“To remember what you have yet to see.”

The lushness of this piece, like a message from a dream someone carries with them until death, leaves me straddling the liminal, wondering how many forces are conspiring to keep us longing, growing, seeking. I love that once the door clicked shut, your character knew not to look back, “I didn’t turn, because to turn and to look was, I realised, to remove the door from my mind.” That line feels key to the mysteries of life, that somehow when we seek conformation, when we need certainty or conversely question something that has moved us, we close the very door that opened us to it in the first place. Your character instead held it inside him, like a precious stone, carried it to the surface of his consciousness, and then took real action in the world to step toward “all he has yet to see.”

Remarkable Nathan. This one is going to stay with me for a long time.

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