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Silvio Castelletti's avatar

This sense of incompleteness and unfulfillment is something I've experienced all my life. Sometimes, I think it might be another one of those messages from the Universe -- perhaps the most important one -- that keeps recurring: life is inherently incomplete and unfulfilled, and all we can do is accept it and navigate through it without succumbing to the anxiety such an idea might provoke. We are obsessed with the notion of beginnings and endings, but perhaps these are just human constructs, tied to our primordial need to assign meaning to everything, especially life itself. I think your marvellous piece captures this intricate web of emotions, questions, and feelings so beautifully. The final passage of the dream is so vivid that I could easily imagine the scene, as if I were the one in the depths of the water, looking up at the parchment with sunlight refracting around it. Another magnificent story, Nathan. I loved it. :)

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Lor's avatar

“…to bear witness to stories that disintegrate upon the light of dawn. “

How many times in the early morning hours, that moment, when my eyes are just seeking the light of day, and my mind for a split second , wakes with the excitement of a great dream to recount, and

poof, it is gone. Not even a spark of a guess.

When I finished reading, I thought of the quote Charles Dickens wrote for his character, Oliver Twist; “ Please sir, I want some more…”

More Dream sequences,

A book to finish this magic of the midnight mind, or a movie script so I can join in your dreamscape.

“As the reality of day blurs into my world, I am left with a singular feeling: Nothing before now is real.”

Excellent, Nathan!

A grand piece of writing.

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